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I think I got the transparency of the vase pretty well. I like the red in the shadow, but it's a bit too large for the size of the vase. I like the intense red (it's more intense than in the picture) against the more muted colors of the background and the surface.
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Good morning, Johanne,
The transparency must have been a little tricky to get just right, but I too think you did it. The reds are great, particularly on the inside of the flared top - really good. What is slightly disconcerting to me is the placement of the catchlight on the silver band - I want to line it up with the catchlights in the flare and the shadow of the vase. I may also be trying to impose a foreign construct that has no place in the art world.
In any case, the form of the vase is lovely to look at.
Bob, you're right: the catchlight/highlight on the band should have been narrower and a little to the right. This way it would have lined up with the light on the flare up. Thanks for your kine eye.
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